Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 5. Show all posts

Sunday, February 21, 2016

Thoughts and Comments

Hey Everyone!

As I look back on all of the past comments I have received I have realized that I have received some pretty amazing comments. Everyone in this class is so nice and encouraging. I think comments are especially engaging whenever they reference something specific in the story. I think comments would be a little bit better if they offered some advice or critiques for the author. 

Thanks so much for all of the comments!
Looking forward to see your future comments.
-Kristine :)

Friday, February 19, 2016

Storytelling for Week 5: Vote for King

Once upon a time there was a huge jungle, and it was filled with hundreds of animals running around in the foliage. Now these animals were of all sizes and had the freedom to do and say as they please. Throughout the years the jungle had many arguments between the different animals. These arguments were usually solved through physical fights, which always got pretty intense and brutal. The worst fight was when a cheetah was caught stealing food from a tiger. Or these disagreements were never solved, and that was even worse because it caused the jungle to become divided.

After many years of spending their life like that, day in and day out, some of the animals found themselves beginning to have hope for change, especially those animals that were both small and weak. The animals wanted peace, and they wanted to be able to walk about the jungle without having to fear their enemies. It didn’t take long for the whispers of peace to travel through the jungle, and very soon it was a single wish that almost all of the animals in the jungle collectively possessed. Peace was in their mind and nothing would stop them from making it a reality. They were just not sure how to make it happen. All of the different types of animals in the jungle were in disagreement on how best to gain peace, and no one was stepping up.

A few weeks of disagreements went by and there had still been no change, and the animals were still fighting amongst each other. Up until now there had only been hopeful rumors of change. Finally, the monkeys decided to take charge and they called a meeting in the center of the jungle. They requested to have one representative from each type of animal attend the meeting. The meeting took place the following day. All of the animals sat in a circle with the monkeys in the middle. Each animal sent to the meeting was the most respected and wisest of its kind, and they were all confused about what they were doing there because there had never been an organized meeting in the jungle before.

The monkeys opened the meeting by explaining that this group was the elite of the jungle and would now be known as the council. They made it clear that this was how they proposed that the council made the decisions for the jungle from now on because it was the only way to have a representative from everyone in the jungle. Everyone else agreed unanimously. However, they still needed a king among the council, and everyone had an opinion about who this leader would be. 


After a lot of disagreements, the council settled on three nominations. In the running for the king was the head monkey, the tiger, and the turtle. The monkey was an option because some of the animals thought the monkeys were smart enough to come up with the idea of the council, so they should be able to lead. The tiger was nominated because he was strong and would intimidate against enemies or thoughts of rebellion or attack. Finally, the turtle was nominated because he was one of the oldest in the jungle therefore he was the wisest and the most experienced.

The decision was set to a vote. All of the animals raised their paw for the animal they thought was best fit to lead. It was a quiet vote without too much discussion because there was a winner by a large majority. By the end of the vote they had a king. King Tiger made his debut as the leader and everyone finally saw peace in the future.

Author's Note:I wrote this story, Vote for King, as a prequel to the story "The Tiger and the Monkeys." It was my way of showing how the tiger became the king of the jungle. The original story just simply stated that there was a council in the jungle but never told how this came to be. I wanted to bring this part of the story to life in order to give the original story more substance and make it a little bit more believable. The original story focused on rebellion and trickery from the monkeys. The king heard a beautiful singing voice and made it known that he would marry the woman the voice belonged to. The monkeys tricked King Tiger into believing the voice belonged to one of their sisters. Once the king decided to marry her he found out it had all been a trick, and that the monkeys had been plotting to attack the king. The story ended with yet another bloody fight in the jungle and King Tiger being forever afraid of the monkeys. I would think the next part of the story would tell about an impeachment of the tiger and a new vote for king.



Bibliography: This story is based on the story, The Tiger and the Monkeys. This story is part of the Khasi Folktales unit. Story source: Folk-Tales of the Khasis by Mrs. K. U. Rafy (1920). 

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Week 5 Reading Diary, Continued: Khasi Folktales

As I continued my second reading diary for the week, I decided to switch gears and begin learning about the Khasi Folktales. The Khasi people live primarily in Meghalaya state in India and also in the neighboring nation of Bangladesh. The stories were collected in the early 20th century and cover a wide range of topics.

The Tiger and the Monkeys: this story immediately caught my attention. First because it was about animals. Then, I was intrigued because I realized it was about the monkeys trying to pull a fast one on their king, the tiger. It made since that the tiger was the king since he is so powerful. I found it very odd that all of the animals were able to hear such a small insect singing in the wild. When the monkey said the voice belonged to his younger sister, I was surprised that the tiger believed this and that it somehow led to marriage.


How the Dog Came to live with Man: once again attracted to this story because of my love of dogs. Once again the tiger is given a title in the story, being the governor. I didn’t find this very unusual. It happened very casual and all of a sudden that the dog decided to leave the jungle and be an attendant to man. It didn’t take long for the man and wife to warm up to the dog and start giving him leftovers from dinner like a modern day family would do.

Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Week 5 Reading Diary: Ancient Egyptian Myths and Stories

For my reading diary this week I decided to focus on Ancient Egyptian Myths and Stories. The selection of stories is from Mackenzie's Egyptian Myth and Legend, and it includes both mythology and folklore. The book consists of the retelling of Egyptian legends, and not direct translations of the ancient Egyptian texts. 



Creation: I personally found this story very interesting because I saw it as kind of a directory of all of the Gods and Goddesses in ancient Egypt. The story really introduced a lot of Gods and Goddesses and told what they are known for. Since I am not very familiar with ancient Egypt, this was extremely helpful for me. Ra is the Creator and he is overall the most important person because according to Egyptians he made Earth and Heaven and pretty much gave us life. To me he is the most interesting God of all.

The Sun’s Journey: the story began in kind of a dark manner speaking of slaughter and I was not really sure what to expect for the remainder of the story. When I think of the sun God I think of happiness so I was taken a little off guard. The story took a huge turn when it showed Ra getting praise from everyone and all of the higher ups. It shows that he is loved and is the light and the happiness that I expected him to be. Overall, the story was pretty challenging for me to understand. Like I said above I am not familiar with ancient Egyptian stories so reading the language was challenging for me.